Looks like drawing by intuition. I really appreciate this. All the haunting for skills should finally result in the ability to let everything go it's own way on the paper, thus the thing in your head takes shape on it, whithout being falsified in anyway by unnecessary plans and thoughts.
Really neat! I like the short poem used for the description. I'd be really interested to know what materials you used for this as it almost looks like charcoal but I don't think it is lol. Either way good job I love how you really captured the movement.